This is just one example amongst many in just the opening quarter of this book where this sort of thing was happening. It just feels like the author wants the alien woman to arrive at a conclusion about our world as quick as is humanly possible, and can't be bothered to lay the groundwork to get her there naturally. I just can't buy that she'd arrive at the conclusion that our society values material things over all else from just that short collection of sentences describing where he is from.
That really short quote summarises what in my mind should have been a conversation that lasted a couple of pages at least. “And this is the place you want help returning to, Ben?” she asked with a tilt of her head. “Many of us value our families over possessions, but not everyone does.” “For some it is, but everyone is different,” I told her as I noticed we’d made our way back to my hut. “Do they not have families? Mates? Friends? Is that not reason enough to work hard and enjoy life?” “Why would they do such a thing?” she asked with a look of concern on her face.
It is packed with over three hundred million people who spend most of their time working jobs so they can buy stuff for themselves that they want and need.” “I live in the United States,” I replied easily. The writing felt clunky and rushed, and it needed another few passes to properly flesh it out.įor example, check out this snippet from the novel where the main character is explaining what his world is like to an alien woman who has never encountered anything from Earth before: The main reason for this is that this book read more like the outline of a novel rather than a novel itself. For example, check out this snippet from the novel where the main character is explaining what his world is like to an alien woman who has never encountered anything from Earth before: “I li It seems I'm in the minority on this one, but I had to give up on this book about 25% of the way into it. The writing felt clunky and rushed, and it needed another few passes to properly flesh it out.
“I barely even listen to suggestions because I’m stubborn on sticking to my vision.It seems I'm in the minority on this one, but I had to give up on this book about 25% of the way into it. “They’ve requested me to make changes to the game (stupid things like making ara and faranne not adoptive sisters if they are to share a scene), which if you all know me, you will know I’ll never do,” wrote Redamz. He stated, “While I had avoided all of their previous witch hunts, it seems they finally don’t like MGI anymore.” On April 28th, Redamz took to the game’s Patreon to post one final update, simply titled “ Leaving Patreon”, to his supporters, notifying them of his decision and explaining that he had chosen to leave the platform. Though the game has been featured on Patreon since it began development, with Redamz all the while openly and proudly wearing the game’s Adult label, it now appears that a recent attempt by the platform to elicit changes within Monster Girl Island has led the indie game developer to end this nearly six-year business relationship.
Related: Patreon Responds To Adult Anime Artists Claiming They Are Being Suspended For Artwork Showing “Sexualized Depictions of Minors” Source: Monster Girl Island (TBD), Redamz